"I thought I'd never be writing a story for Penthouse Forum......"

*shrug* I've been discussing the plot with feminists. They don't think it's off base

was the revolution/revival at the same time? If so, it seems like your story is about 70 year old lesbians.

That Admiral is one sick puppy then.....

Maybe they're LILFs. Don't judge until we know more.

No the events take place in early 22nd century. The story is told through the lens of fifty some odd year old memory.

So the lesbians are only in their 20s, but the narration is 50 years later?

Yes. I wrote this and more, put down my beer and am ignoring it while some thoughts percolate, then I'll clean it up and move on to the day it all started.

Ok. A story about young lesbians is much more likely to get the male audience than old lesbians.....a little too close to reality and not enough like fantasy.

Just be sure to make it not suck the way I hear Enders Game sucked (the movie) at the end. I wasn't really a fan of the way Xenocide or Speaker for the Dead were either....felt like a different theme/world altogether.

Now if you want to go more Timothy Zahn style, that would be cool.